This week Room 2 were continuing on with adding details and description to our writing to make it more exciting for our audience. We were working specifically on describing ourselves as a carry on from our self-portraits. Our success criteria included making sure we included details about our personalities, our favourite things, as well as describing our physical appearance. Please listen and leave us some positive comments. (Please note: while we all drew self-portraits, some of our writers go to Mrs Hammond to practise their writing and so just added a brief comment to their photo, rather than the detailed work that we had done in class.) | |
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Natalie Pearson
3/3/2015 10:55:36 pm
It is lovely to hear all about the children and how their name came to be, also nice to hear what they like doing.
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Emma Poyner
24/3/2015 10:08:25 am
So good to hear the children talking about who they are and what they like to do!
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